Cool, I'd say my biggest criticism is where is the scientist? I'm not seeing anything that reads like he was once a scientist, just is a monster. Safety goggles, lab coat, rubber booties? Something that calls back to his backstory.
That's a good point. Earliest version had a lab coat but I felt it covered up the muscles and just wasn't working out, also a chemical vat but couldn't get it looking alright.
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also a chemical vat but couldn't get it looking alright.