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Hi everyone!

I have been working on this dance animation for a long time now and I would really love some feedback on it. 
Been looking at it for sooo long I feel I'm becoming blind to mistakes.

here's the link
edit: file has been removed

thank you!!

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  • AnthonyAnimation
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    Dances are very challenging and highly recommend using reference. If you do have reference you could post that as well, it would help critique it knowing the source. The main thing to focus on is weight and timing. There are a few parts in here that seem a bit too quick. F60-130 has a lot of pose changes for example.

    Generally the feet and hips are what I'll focus on first and it seems like the character you have isn't off balance much which is great. There are a few parts where he feels stiff, some arc tracking would would (especially with the limbs). Thanks for sharing! 
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  • ajramsey28
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    Thank you for the response and feedback. I do have a reference, its a really odd dance. I slowed down some area's a couple of weeks ago. 
    update file here:
    edit file has been removed

    my reference is here :
    The actual reference starts at 6:04 and ends 6:21

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NOTjyCM3Ou4


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