Cybork Jump Kick

MIKENTNZ

This is a quick animation that I put together. It's nothing fancy, but it's practice. Any feedback is welcomed.


https://youtu.be/Rj05hwt-X0c

AnthonyAnimation

Cool! For critique sake I would recommend uploading to Syncsketch and also removing the camera move. Sometimes with camera movement it's difficult to follow the action as smoothly. There are a few parts in there that are happening too quickly and a few poses I think could be pushed more. I'd be happy to give more detailed feedback if you provide a Syncsketch link.

ajramsey28

That is an interesting jump kick! The beginning feels a little stiff but he is an android XD I agree with what was mentioned above, some parts are really fast its a little hard to tell whats happening. Overall cool work!

MIKENTNZ

Thanks for the feedback. Here is a syncsketch link. I appreciate you taking time out to look at this.

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/197769#266742