Traditional Artwork (PencilonPaper) (Critiques needed)

AshishVerma

Here I'll be posting some of my recent traditional artwork. Critiques and Comments are most welcome.

















Some comparative stylized proportion and anatomy study.


Self Portrait


A quick master study of a Egyptian portrait.


Below is a quick master study of a famous sculpture Victory by Michelangelo.

AshishVerma

I'll be doing some more master studies on traditional medium. Hope I'll get better. 

TudorMorris

I wouldn't bother with the notes, unless you really feel it helps. Try doing more like x20 small ones on a page and do them fast rather than focussing on one.

AshishVerma

Thanks for the comment and I'll keep your suggestions in mind and improve my next piece.

AshishVerma

Some  head studies and other stuff.