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Takedown Animation Critique

crunderw
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Hey guys, I've been working on this takedown animation for a while and I feel I'm getting to a good stopping point. I was just wondering what you all thought before I go back in for one last work over. 

Syncsketch link: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/186367#243256
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  • WeatherMan
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    WeatherMan polycounter lvl 6
    I left you a few notes. Overall it's a decent start but you need to think more about who the characters are (this is something I struggle with A LOT as well). Do you have reference for this? Or are you just straight animating out of your head? Who are the characters? What is the context? Why are they doing what they're doing? It lacks context and intention. You could also spice it up with a less static camera. Good luck.
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