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run cycle:
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/184466#238971

jump:
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/184467#238972

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  • brucemoose
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    brucemoose polycounter lvl 3
    Hi, remember when the foot makes contact with the ground it has to be a linear curve.  In your run cycle it seems to go very fast then almost sticks at the end.

    He looks like a hunter, so maybe compose his head and give him a clear intention/direction to look at, because as of now it feels like it's being thrown around by the body and the jaw is snap sticking.Tigers and big cats move their heads very little in reality, eyes are usually focused and locked to the target!

    That's a cool looking rig B)
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  • Johnnyho90
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    Johnnyho90 polycounter lvl 2
    hey thanks for the feedback. Made the changes and I think it's looking much better better now. Thanks :D

    updated run:
    https://syncsketch.com/sketch/184944#239927

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