Abandoned environments. UE4

RasmusBagner

Hey, i have been working on these two scenes in UE4. I made the stairway first and then the room after. They are done to prepare for my examn


   



 Any feedback would be awesome. Things to add or fix.

FreneticPonies

The first one feels weird. Why is the rain going through the stairs? Why is there so much fog inside, why is it blue? The railing comes off as hyper repetitive and very flat.

The second one is perfect, awesome awesome awesome lighting.

RasmusBagner

Yeah, the first one was done in way to short time. I feel into alot of time mistakes, that i have learned to avoid now. 

Thanks alot! 

RasmusBagner

I updated the scene with some better particles and foliage from Ivy pack by SilverTm. 

Ali_Youssef

The second environment is breathtaking !
The lighting is spot-on

RasmusBagner

Thanks alot man! I also am really happy with that one. The first one not so much

mats effect

Yeah awesome lighting inn that second one, nice assets too. Second one is nice too the rails just really throw it off for me, connecting them to the ones that go up the steps could help a lot. 

RasmusBagner

Yeah, the first one is not that well executed. I should have put more time aside to it. The railing diden´t end up being that great, and was a pain to make.

RasmusBagner

This is the newest environment that i am working on. I still have 2 weeks left to use on it. I am currently updating the hole in the roof and the edge dirt around the sides of the walls. After that i will add foliage. Any feedback would as always be awesome, the same goes for things that could make it more awesome. 

RasmusBagner

Yeah, i will have to add a variation of the baseboards on top also add some decals. I have been thinking about adding a sofa and a old tv. 

RasmusBagner

Another update. Still alot to do

RasmusBagner

Yeah i am going to add alot more dirt. I do have a ref but i do not want to take to much inspiration from it. I only used it for the main structural things. Walls windows things like that.

FreneticPonies

The godrays don't align at all, which is really bothering me.

RasmusBagner

Another update. I have aligned the rays more. The black box is going to be a 1970 tv. I want to do another pass on the sofa if i have time.