Miner ID:34 ( Working on my first game ready charter, really looking for criticism)

mrpoox

Hello, I have been working in Zbrush for some time. Now working on making my first game ready character ( retop, texture, no rigging). This project will take a while, becouse I have to learn so much to finish it and I just started my first year of college.( anyone from Mount Ida? ) , besides that I also want it to take a while, so I can learn as much as I can. I do hope to get as much criticism and help as I can while I am working on it and when I am done. I do not mind completely redoing parts of it, if it is needed. Thank you so much.

Concept is done by a great friend of mine: https://www.artstation.com/stephansink ( knowing him he also wouldn't mind criticism)


Here are different pictures of a WIP rn, don't know exactly how long I have been working on it due to last couple of weeks before school and first couple of weeks during school being chaotic. 


P.S. All of the Pics are with perspective on. Idk if should have them on or off for something like this

mrpoox

Had a ton of work for school, so it is taking much longer that I thought. Haven't really worked on any hard surface before, so it is quite challenging for me. Not that happy how pants came out of Marvelous, so might have to rework them a bit. However still having fun and learning a ton.

mrpoox

Ended up using this guy for a mini game project for a class, wasn't a biggest fan of how texture and re top came out, so not going to show it, but learned a ton from this project and looking forward working on the next one.

Brian "Panda" Choi

The pants are reading a polyester make, but I imagine they're supposed to be somewhat canvas-y?  If that's the case, the material sculpt could use some finessing to look more canvas-y.

mrpoox

Brian "Panda" Choi said:

The pants are reading a polyester make, but I imagine they're supposed to be somewhat canvas-y?  If that's the case, the material sculpt could use some finessing to look more canvas-y.

Thank you for feedback! Pants have defiantly been a struggle,still learning Marvelous and haven't really done any. I will twick around with them as soon as I get some free time(finals week T_T).

Brian "Panda" Choi

Also, how do you mine with an axe?

mrpoox

Brian "Panda" Choi said:

Also, how do you mine with an axe?

Hey it wasn't my concept E_E , but that is a good point

Brian "Panda" Choi

I'd fix it.  You don't have a miner, you have a blacksmith lumberjack.