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  • EliasWick
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    EliasWick polycounter lvl 10
    Hey, I love the sky and the leaves / bushes looks great, but I feel a bit dizzy looking at the image. It's hard to know what I am looking at, is it an island or a mountain?

    The stone blocks on top of the tower could be a bit thicker and I would suggest to find a focal point, something that sticks out and grabs your attention, playing with colors are great for that.

    Don't forget about "Rule Of Thirds": http://www.photographymad.com/pages/view/rule-of-thirds

    Also, I would personally recommend typing something about the artpiece if it's in relation to some of your other work.
  • nico1984
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    nico1984 polycounter lvl 4
    hi thanks for your replay, the original idea is this one, though im having a little trouble with the dragon scales  :)
  • EVF
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    EVF polycounter lvl 3
    as far as the scales, don't try to render every single one of them, suggest them in areas of lesser attention, and then put more love on the one that could help you define a focus point.
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