Bio cannon (wip)

oreoorbitz

 
A fun little gun, ive been working in between larger projects. Based off https://www.artstation.com/artwork/GJWq1.
Plan to make game rez

stororokw

A good start. I think the forms are there, but they seem muted. I would push them more.
I think the holes/membrane(?) where the light leaks from needs some more work because it looks too artificial.
Also, where the teeth at the back meets with the skin I feel like it needs to have the same treatment as you have done with the front set.
I like the addition of the spiral thing, but I think it needs to be integrated more into the rest of the body.

oreoorbitz

@stororokw  You're right about the wholes. They lack a sense of form, more stamped on then formed. So I played with this different form, hopefully it looks more interesting. Still struggling along with the top of the gun, I want to have interesting forms, but I don't them to be too noisy. I'll be redoing the lines on the stock.

oreoorbitz

Making some more progress, branching off from the concept and adding elements I find interesting.

stororokw

Looking good. The spiral thing looks a little neglected compared to the rest though. I think that adding some more interesting grooves/silhouette might help.

oreoorbitz

@stororokw  Hey thanks for the suggestion. I gave the handle some detail, i'll admit its a bit random, but it looks cool.

oreoorbitz

Not much, just detail work, getting close to being done with modeling, just a few more details here and there

oreoorbitz

Okaaaay. Started texturing, will share screenshot of albedo and roughness later. Still got add all the teeth. ways to go.