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Ren
Ren
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Ren polycounter lvl 3
Hello all!

I'm always looking to improve myself as an animator, but often run into a wall when staring at my own animations for too long. Thus! I turn to my fellow animation lovers. Any feedback on good/bads and right/wrongs lazy/impressive suggestions would be great!

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Q6Zgx


Thank you in advance!

Ren
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  • PakoTCB
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    PakoTCB polycounter lvl 7
    I do not specialize in animation but my take on it is that maybe it would benefit to have more movement on the shoulders and back. I like the acting on the character, gives it more personality than just a generic npc but push it further in the walk. It has a decent silhouette so I'd just say keep on pushing the body mechanics of it all. 
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  • Ren
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    Ren polycounter lvl 3
    @PakoTCB Thanks for the suggestions. I agree a little more movement in the back and chest would give it a bit more weight.
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