WIP Stylized female character (my second full character)

Gam3B0y

Hello, this is my first post here. 

it needs some finishing pieces, also the weapons are undecided. I want to give her something interesting (melee weapon, not so futuristic), but I don't know what. hair will be redone, 
costume designe is almost done. 
I'd be happy to get any feedback 



PS: I started learning 3d a year and a half ago, on my own. but I have almost no time, I work as Graphic Designer/video editor, so I rarely make progress ) 

Gam3B0y

added some detail 

universe

Really nice work! I love the clothes and the amour, the whole character look nice but I’d make the nose more femine and delicate. I’m waiting for more

carvuliero

Could you please post nude version without prospective 
At first glance under chin , neck , arm location , hip and whole upper body posture look strange 

dGreenberg

Hey @Gam3B0y, that's some awesome work for your second full character! First thing that catches my eye is her head position (from the side view) in your first post. I think you could try pushing that back just a tiny bit to give her a more neutral and relaxed pose. This might also be the perspective from that image though, so I'm not certain.

With all the detail you've put on her pants and boots I think it could also help to add something more up top. You'll want to lead the viewer's eye to her face but right now I keep looking at the pants, spikes, folds, and knee pad. That might change when you fix up her hair but it's just a thought. Great work so far and hope to see you update her soon.

Gam3B0y

universe said:

Really nice work! I love the clothes and the amour, the whole character look nice but I’d make the nose more femine and delicate. I’m waiting for more

TNX man, as nose goes, IDK I like noses with character.  

carvuliero said:

Could you please post nude version without prospective 
At first glance under chin , neck , arm location , hip and whole upper body posture look strange 

here's nude version

dGreenberg said:

Hey @Gam3B0y, that's some awesome work for your second full character! First thing that catches my eye is her head position (from the side view) in your first post. I think you could try pushing that back just a tiny bit to give her a more neutral and relaxed pose. This might also be the perspective from that image though, so I'm not certain.

With all the detail you've put on her pants and boots I think it could also help to add something more up top. You'll want to lead the viewer's eye to her face but right now I keep looking at the pants, spikes, folds, and knee pad. That might change when you fix up her hair but it's just a thought. Great work so far and hope to see you update her soon.

she's not posed yet man, first picture (first post ) is older itertion BTW. she'll get more natural look when posed, 
as details go, I changed some things, I'm doing UVs now and then I'm gonna texture her. 
I'll post the resuts 

Gam3B0y

universe said:

Really nice work! I love the clothes and the amour, the whole character look nice but I’d make the nose more femine and delicate. I’m waiting for more

TNX man, as nose goes, IDK I like noses with character.  

carvuliero said:

Could you please post nude version without prospective 
At first glance under chin , neck , arm location , hip and whole upper body posture look strange 

here's nude version

dGreenberg said:

Hey @Gam3B0y, that's some awesome work for your second full character! First thing that catches my eye is her head position (from the side view) in your first post. I think you could try pushing that back just a tiny bit to give her a more neutral and relaxed pose. This might also be the perspective from that image though, so I'm not certain.

With all the detail you've put on her pants and boots I think it could also help to add something more up top. You'll want to lead the viewer's eye to her face but right now I keep looking at the pants, spikes, folds, and knee pad. That might change when you fix up her hair but it's just a thought. Great work so far and hope to see you update her soon.

she's not posed yet man, first picture (first post ) is older itertion BTW. she'll get more natural look when posed, 
as details go, I changed some things, I'm doing UVs now and then I'm gonna texture her. 
I'll post the resuts 

Gam3B0y

universe said:

Really nice work! I love the clothes and the amour, the whole character look nice but I’d make the nose more femine and delicate. I’m waiting for more

TNX man, as nose goes, IDK I like noses with character.  

carvuliero said:

Could you please post nude version without prospective 
At first glance under chin , neck , arm location , hip and whole upper body posture look strange 

here's nude version

dGreenberg said:

Hey @Gam3B0y, that's some awesome work for your second full character! First thing that catches my eye is her head position (from the side view) in your first post. I think you could try pushing that back just a tiny bit to give her a more neutral and relaxed pose. This might also be the perspective from that image though, so I'm not certain.

With all the detail you've put on her pants and boots I think it could also help to add something more up top. You'll want to lead the viewer's eye to her face but right now I keep looking at the pants, spikes, folds, and knee pad. That might change when you fix up her hair but it's just a thought. Great work so far and hope to see you update her soon.

she's not posed yet man, first picture (first post ) is older itertion BTW. she'll get more natural look when posed, 
as details go, I changed some things, I'm doing UVs now and then I'

Gam3B0y

I finished texturing her ) I hope you all like it 

Markmars

first check the proportions.

https://imgur.com/a/7lxGx

Markmars

https://imgur.com/a/ejnuk

Gam3B0y

Markmars said:

first check the proportions.

https://imgur.com/a/7lxGx

do you know what "stylised" means? 

Markmars

I know. 

example. 

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Ban2m

decide yourself

just your proportions look strange

design is good.

but you can still improve it.

Good luck!