Respawn Animation Feedback

Pyronatic

Hi Guys and Girls, I just finished blocking out a respawn or revival animation that I have been working on and just wanted to see if I could get some feedback?

Block out: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/178106#226578

KielFiggins

That's a pretty bare bones blocking, so not a lot to go on.  I'd take another pass at it, adding a few more breakdowns to better convey your idea.  Also, that's a lot of dead space at the beginning, unless you have a plan for it, i'd cut more immediately to the respawn.