Beyond Human Challenge - Oriental robotics

Antone_m

Hey guys/gals , I joined Artstation`s challenge and thought of posting updates here to get some critiques (I know I`am way behind but I will try to be as fast as I can)

I will be working on a concept by Yong Yi Lee - Oriental robotics

Antone_m

here are the first update , started to block the character couple of nights work , feel free to tear it apart with critiques 





https://www.artstation.com/contests/beyond-human/challenges/24/submissions/20830

David-J

It's looking really cool. 

My only comment would be to experiment on different ways the wires attach to the face on the side. Right now on the bottom image it looks very sharp that straight line. You could try a paintover for more organic ways to attach them Could be better, could be worse. haha.

Cheers!

Elithenia

This is really neat!

Antone_m

@David-J : thanks for the crit and tried to solve it in the new update .... let me know what you think 
@Elithenia : thank you

https://www.artstation.com/contests/beyond-human/challenges/24/submissions/20830

Antone_m

thought of sharing this render here from marmoset