3 characters in my portfolio, 3 mustache/beard older male, next time I shall go young and female Anyway, characters is not my forte, and I am trying to diversify my portfolio, so please let me have it here
Some nice exaggerated shapes and volumes - great looking character design, but I have a few pointers though: 1) Your material definition seems a little too similar at the moment, everything looks like it's made from the same thing 2) Your values could definitely be pushed 3) Anatomy is off - I get that this is stylised, but the hands stick out as bad 4) No sense of gesture or weight dispersion - he has that staff, but he's not leaning on it or using it to walk? 5) Owl wings are a bit jarring
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1) Your material definition seems a little too similar at the moment, everything looks like it's made from the same thing
2) Your values could definitely be pushed
3) Anatomy is off - I get that this is stylised, but the hands stick out as bad
4) No sense of gesture or weight dispersion - he has that staff, but he's not leaning on it or using it to walk?
5) Owl wings are a bit jarring