H.A.R: My developing story

TsilenC

Tbh I've been slacking a bit on art work for this...its been hard to maintain a steady flow of work with Landscaping as a job lol. So far these are the concept characters I've made and I want to see what you guys think of them! I'll slowly be updating with more info as things get a bit faster

Macattackk

Id say the dotism style is not doing you any favors for concept art. Also the pure black parts dont help either. It does not create much definition and is holding back your shading detail by quite a bit. Your anatomy and especially drapery needs a lot of work. It seems you are going too much for minor details and not putting as much work into the initial structure of the drawing. Id take a look around the forums and try to adapt your work more towards what others do as far as how concept art should be rendered.