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Character critique please :)

EVF
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EVF polycounter lvl 3
Before I start rendering my heart away, any critiques on anatomy and design?
Thank you plenty :)


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  • audi100
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    audi100 polycounter lvl 11
    Hey EVF. Thats a cute little dude. Like the crazy Turban he is Wearing.
    One thing that strikes me wrong is his walking posture. I think his hips are rotating the wrong way, they should rotate towards the leg that is coming forward. Also his staff could be positioned/rotated maybe more towards the camera to give the feeling that he is about to catch his stride. something like that


  • EVF
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    EVF polycounter lvl 3
    @audi100 thanks a lot, I see the hip thing now, I'll flip the torso, and lift the cane of the ground and tilt it fwd.
    Thanks for the good advice my friend!
  • ifuxedup
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    ifuxedup polycounter lvl 3
    great. 
    A suggestion from me, would be to get the right hand more defined. he is obviously curling his mustache, but i think you could exaggerate the gesture of his arm a little more, just to make it interesting. perhaps extend the arm into the foreground, as if he's tugging on it into the curl around his finger. it looks a little flat, everything is mid ground.

    i'm sure it will look great tho. it's a good sketch!
  • EVF
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    EVF polycounter lvl 3
    @ifuxedup Thanks! And I like that idea of yours, I'll see if I can make it wurk :)

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