Hey EVF. Thats a cute little dude. Like the crazy Turban he is Wearing. One thing that strikes me wrong is his walking posture. I think his hips are rotating the wrong way, they should rotate towards the leg that is coming forward. Also his staff could be positioned/rotated maybe more towards the camera to give the feeling that he is about to catch his stride. something like that
@audi100 thanks a lot, I see the hip thing now, I'll flip the torso, and lift the cane of the ground and tilt it fwd. Thanks for the good advice my friend!
great. A suggestion from me, would be to get the right hand more defined. he is obviously curling his mustache, but i think you could exaggerate the gesture of his arm a little more, just to make it interesting. perhaps extend the arm into the foreground, as if he's tugging on it into the curl around his finger. it looks a little flat, everything is mid ground.
i'm sure it will look great tho. it's a good sketch!
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One thing that strikes me wrong is his walking posture. I think his hips are rotating the wrong way, they should rotate towards the leg that is coming forward. Also his staff could be positioned/rotated maybe more towards the camera to give the feeling that he is about to catch his stride.
Thanks for the good advice my friend!
A suggestion from me, would be to get the right hand more defined. he is obviously curling his mustache, but i think you could exaggerate the gesture of his arm a little more, just to make it interesting. perhaps extend the arm into the foreground, as if he's tugging on it into the curl around his finger. it looks a little flat, everything is mid ground.
i'm sure it will look great tho. it's a good sketch!