A railgun

PostNuker

Hi there, folks! I've been modelling for a while and at some point i tried to design some concepts myself. I'd like ask for some critique of this railgun. At least that's what i like to call it
I would very appreciate any comments regarding overall design, texturework and geometry.

daniellooartist

The surface wear looks overdone Metal does not usually corrode. It does, however, collect tons of dirt that (for lack of a better word) fuses with the metal. You could put in some nice grease stains.

Here's a similar asset from Zero Dawn to give you an idea of what I'm referring to. Even then, based on the size, you probably won't have to exaggerate it THAT much.
https://cdna.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/005/767/776/large/nazz-abdoel-2.jpg?1493645309

PostNuker

Thanks a lot!