Attack Combo - Feedback Please

cambamkaboom

Hi everyone, 

Looking for feedback on an Attack animation I've been working on:
https://syncsketch.com/playground/e4fd3ed3b350487db459ec470b430fce#203253

Any feedback would be most appreciated.

Cheers, 
Cameron

Refia

I made some annotations hope It can help !

cambamkaboom

@Refia thank you for the notes! I'll be sure to hit them!

Refia

I'll make other annotations latter ! Keep that way your animation is quiet rough but it is taking a good way. 
By the way I'm not a professional animator at all so maybe some of my advices aren't perfect but hope it can help !