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Happy 4th of july!! Just practicing my edges here!

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  • Doodlok
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    Doodlok interpolator
    Ayeeeeeeee, I freaking love the colorscheme, especially with the car on the right end. This is definitely resonating with the good old days feeling. So nice :D 

    Not really a critique, but Im wondering how it would look like if the car was red? I think that might work too...or maybe not. 
  • superman2034
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    Hey Doodlok, If I make the car red the flow of the composition will only goes to the car so it can ruin the balance of eye movement and that's not my focal point so red is bad and it doesnt give any back story on it even I make the car as a focal point.

    The focal point is the girl and the woman second is the house so when you look at it. It has this flow that goes around the canvas.

    Thanks for the input thou.

  • c00kieheart
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    c00kieheart greentooth
    Super cool lighting!
    I was wondering though, did you try adding something to the screen left to keep the eye from wandering off the image?
  • superman2034
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    Yeah I did, I put a small glimpse of the house on the left. But if it is not enough I'll add more. 
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