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UE4 BEDROOM CRITIQUE NEEDED

3dkoo82
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Hi all 

Ive been working on this bedroom scene for UE4 for the past few weeks. Its still a work in progress I know but I am unsure on how I can improve the scene in its current state.

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  • Toafaloaf
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    Toafaloaf polycounter lvl 6
    This is really cool, I like your choice of posters. It looks pretty perfect so all I have for you is ideas. Perhaps tacs in the posters. Wires for the speakers on the wall. Maybe a remote for the TV. Blinds for the window. The door seems really big aswell. The blanket looks almost too perfect. Maybe a wrinkle in the bed or smudge somwhere from an ash since it is a smoking room. Just being picky to be helpful. Great job. Happy modelling. :)
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  • HolBol
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    HolBol vertex
    One thing I noticed with the bottom most picture in that set is that the walls are really grubby, but the bed is completely pristine. Maybe add some faded stains like the sheets have been used and washed many times? And also add some light dust and smears on the tops of the units holding the TV and turntables. You could also give the posters on the wall some fold marks and creases, maybe a little wear and tear on the edges.

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