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Ashecutioner

Hey guys 'n' gals,
Been working in the games industry for a few years, but I'm new to the forum... Stumbled across the death anim exercise recently and it motivated me to sign up

Been working on a fight scene in my spare time - haven't got very far with it yet, but I'd appreciate any feedback!

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/160024#194388

AnthonyAnimation

Cool shot! A big thing is the silhouette of the person on the ground. I had not idea what the pile of stuff was until it jumped up out of the way. Part of it is because my attention was on the beast, the other part is that the costume (especially the back piece) is complex. If you can simplify the silhouette and spread the character out a bit it should help.

Ashecutioner

Hey Anthony, thanks for the feedback.
Yeah, looking at it again, I agree. I'll see if I can tidy it up a little.