Max Caulfield ( Again ) Revisited WIP

Francois_K

Since I actully have something to show this time.

Sculpts with Zbro Paint for the skin


Marmoset Toolbag 3 WIP

stororokw

Looks good, but she looks like shes in her early 30s. What age are you aiming for?
There also appears to be too much definition for the pecs, which is causing too much shadowing there.

Francois_K

I don't see the age you pointed out. What makes you say she's in her early 30s?
Also fixed the pectorals and made them softer.

stororokw

Just my opinion you can ignore if you want.

• I feel that it is mainly to do with the midface; the cheeks feel rather gaunt.
• The transition from the nose to brow region feels too harsh.
• The eyes appear to look like they are sagging a little.

Magihat

Yeah, she really does look much older and I certainly think that she could use another pass to make her a bit more recognizable to the original even if I you are going for a more realistic take. Also, for presentation purposes I would suggest using "toy plastic" or another highly specular matcap on the eyes to avoid the dead eyes. Obligatory PO gif:

Francois_K

Thanks for the paintovers/gifs

Got some more anatomy critique on the hangouts

Francois_K

hair struggle time

Elithenia

you can do it!  

Tits

Your avatar confuses me still
Are you going for a less stylised version of the character?
The face still look a bit manly to me in the last screenshot, her upper torso also look a bit ''thick'' in my opinion

Francois_K

Thanks @Elithenia
Sorry @Tits ( I CHANGED IT! )
I acknowledged your critique on the hangout , I still haven't gotten around to it ( I also haven't forgotten about the shoulder )  yet however as I've been wrestling with the hair.

Speaking of which , here's an update.

Francois_K

Tests

Durkel

Really nice proces Francois. It's getting close, but her likeness on the hair and the eyes feel off. She also looks like a lot older then in the game. Anyways, here is my feedback:

- Her hair is really puffy. This gives her a very motherly look. Try to avoid a circular silhouette.
- The movement of the eyes and eyebrows go downwards, this gives her a bit of a sad face.
- The eyes are pretty grayed out. Making her eyes more pop willl make her look younger.
- I would make her nose slightly smaller, more of a personal taste though.
- Darken the area above her eyes (smokey eyes).. but very subtle.



Hope this feedback helps. Looking forward to the end result.

Keep it up!

Derk