Quick update: I think I have the idea down in my head of where I want to take it. - Pilot of some sort of space formula one vehicle - Suit design needs to look FAST
I am occupied with graduating atm so I do not have a lot of time to put into it. More to come soon
#Hyped! Well, keep in mind that the helmet should not remove that "kindness" from her face, however, putting the helmet under her arms in a pose, like motorcycle-bike-ride-dudes-or-dudettes, would be awesome.
Thanks Danny, I was indeed thinking of the helmet under the arm pose ^^ And @lotet I also feel like the face needs more work so I will get on that asap (stay tuned!)
Little update I was stuck on the design for a bit, mostly the hip patches that did not work for me so i tried something without and think it helped. I will start cleaning it up and retopologize soon
I sorta looked at tracer (overwatch) a lot for inspiration, that is I guess where it came from :') I felt like it was missing something in this area though, and felt the white armor pieces needed to be more balanced... regardless, I did try something else and would like some feedback on which one people prefer. I might try some more in the meantime but also want to get the character done within a few weeks. Personally I prefer the mix(#3) atm, which is a photoshop hack atm, but I do feel the piece ads more than it takes away.
Hi Jeroen! Well, the "all white" image from a few posts back looks great, that with white-ish/grey hair, but this is just personal (image), and probably not the direction you are aiming for. But, good progress you have made there. Do have to agree with Elithenia's comment on the chestplate, might look uncomportable, but what do I know... Design No. 1 looks to me more like a tracksuite, so is not very modern/sci-fi in design. I personally would aim for image No. 2, but like the yellow "lines" on the sides of the ribcage in image No. 3. Also like the angled collar in No. 2 over the straight one in the other two, this because you have no straight lines in your design, why make the collar straight... right?
Hi again! Thanks @kanga ! So based on the feedback of all you lovely people here is the latest update and I think final design (unless you guys have more awesome feedback )
Thanks again everyone ^^ Ill keep you posted with more soon.
Nice Update again! Just wondering... She has this nice space suit on for body protection, even wears a helmet for head protection, but leaves an open space on her "chest"? Do they protect "themselves"? Is she normally when flying -or doing awesome space stuff- wearing another suite over this one? Anywho, great update , can't wait till the next update! What are your plans? Retop, Bake, Texturing (QS2 or SP) and then final render in (Marmoset, UE4)? Cheers! -Danny
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Quick update:
I think I have the idea down in my head of where I want to take it.
- Pilot of some sort of space formula one vehicle
- Suit design needs to look FAST
I am occupied with graduating atm so I do not have a lot of time to put into it. More to come soon
Maybe you can post some more shots of the face?
here you go ^^
Sorry for the late reply have been busy with the graduation stuff
Thank you
I think her chin could stand to be a little further down and out....
small update since I had some extra time left today
For me it looks better!
The hair is a nice touch but if you´re going to do a pilot with a huge helmet... it´s going to be visible?
thanks a bunch
Bit more work on the suit :')
I'm happy with the shoulder/torso part of it, the rest needs more though.
Little update
I was stuck on the design for a bit, mostly the hip patches that did not work for me so i tried something without and think it helped.
I will start cleaning it up and retopologize soon
I sorta looked at tracer (overwatch) a lot for inspiration, that is I guess where it came from :') I felt like it was missing something in this area though, and felt the white armor pieces needed to be more balanced... regardless, I did try something else and would like some feedback on which one people prefer. I might try some more in the meantime but also want to get the character done within a few weeks.
Personally I prefer the mix(#3) atm, which is a photoshop hack atm, but I do feel the piece ads more than it takes away.
Thanks for the initial feedback @Elithenia
I will have another look
thanks for the feedback!
Great work.
Thanks @kanga !
So based on the feedback of all you lovely people here is the latest update and I think final design (unless you guys have more awesome feedback
Thanks again everyone ^^
Ill keep you posted with more soon.