Please tear this to shred with critiques, It's an art test and I'm trying to get my big break. I was told to make a fantasy tower so I am focusing on that, I made a quick landscape and put some grass on it so I'm not distracting from the tower itself.

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Now, correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm willing to bet that you based it on this image:
Am I right? If so, the resulting image is just less interesting than the original, but similar enough that if someone is familiar with the inspiration, they will just remember how it was cooler. The answer isn't to just copy the inspiration more closely, but to think of ways to make your own tower more interesting and unique to YOU. That's how I feel.
1: the grass can be improved, with color variation and other things... rocks, flowers, leafs...?
2: the hill you have in the background just behind the tower... for me it messes with the composition, maybe move it to the side, as it seems distracting to really see the tower...
Just some personal comments... might be right or wrong... tho looking forward to more updates
https://chrisc3d.artstation.com/projects/GWwld