Feedback on a Spell and Attack

HeyGafilimore

Hey All!

Haven't posted in a while but I've put some time into a few side animations and I'd like some feedback!

Spell Slam:
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/160070#194460

Amazonian Attack:
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/160067#194459

Any input would be greatly appreciated, thanks!

Einar

These are really fun, especially like the last one, left a few notes on it as i had alitle bit of time. Also consider giving both of them a camera pass in the end, it will help the shots a lot.

Nice work, solid stuff!

Luk0

I added one or two things to the syncketch of the amazonian attack as well. Its looking really nice! There was just a few things I saw that I added on to what Einar said. 

HeyGafilimore

Thanks for the feedback guys! Excellent points

AnthonyAnimation

Hey @HeyGafilimore, I added some notes to the Spell Slam. I hope they help. Overall good start, it just needs some timing/spacing changes and with a little more work on the poses you'll be in a good spot. Because the camera is zoomed out you really want to focus on strong poses that can read from afar or change the camera a bit.

Archanex

cool stuff man, I left you some notes on syncsketch

HeyGafilimore

Awesome, I totally agree on the pose suggestions for the spell pound. I should be able to post updates soon!