Where do i need to improve?

toast336

Hey could some of you please review my work and tell me where i should focus on improving the most? Thanks

http://polycount.com/discussion/187846/hard-surface-prop-model-artist#latest

Brian "Panda" Choi

More interesting pieces.

Everyone's made a crate.

Texturing looks decent on the shed.  Could use more story via a full on environment.

ozzy310

I agree. You need to implement some kind of story behind your art samples to make it more interesting. Also, I wouldn't use a pitch black background to present your work. The shed looks promising just keep working on it, especially the ground maybe you haven't gotten to it yet because it looks blurry and unfinished. 

samnwck

On top of what the others are saying, you also posted a picture that has arrows pointing to UV seam issues I believe. Which is an odd thing to present to someone looking to hire you, so definitely presentation is a place that could use some focus even though that was mentioned already, but it's good to be mindful what you're presenting to the general populous. My general thoughts though: think about going for larger projects.

toast336

ozzy310 said:

I agree. You need to implement some kind of story behind your art samples to make it more interesting. Also, I wouldn't use a pitch black background to present your work. The shed looks promising just keep working on it, especially the ground maybe you haven't gotten to it yet because it looks blurry and unfinished. 

Thank you i took your advice.

Brian "Panda" Choi

I can't tell what changed with that scene.  What edits did you make?

toast336

Brian "Panda" Choi said:

I can't tell what changed with that scene.  What edits did you make?

this was the old one