Awesome job man! One thing i could say to pay attention to is the focal points in the picture, my eye keeps going to the tree when its sapose to go to the guy sitting down, this can be fixed by using the rule of 3rds, here i made a quick notes and edits to show you what i mean hope this helps
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you could push slightly darker values in the tree trunk and fg leaves.
It made me think of the secret life of pets
Id say maybe some of the detail on the big tree and roots could be a bit more stylized.
It's my interpretation of a Charles Bukowski poem about my favorite vice: comparing myself to other people.
Honestly storyboards and layouts have always been a weakness. I'm getting better, but definitely not there yet.