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xFAK10
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xFAK10 polycounter lvl 2
I'm xFaK10 and this is my first Environment https://www.artstation.com/p/Nz1aJ What do you guys think?
Everything done by me except the textures and the fire particle 

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  • Ashervisalis
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    Ashervisalis grand marshal polycounter
    Nice one. The mood your lighting creates really goes with the dungeon! Your materials are pretty cool too. Here's a few CC's I've got;

    The shadow of the torch closest to us doesn't make any sense. The flame on the torch is the only source of light in that area, but somehow it's casting a shadow in a weird angle. The only shadow it should cast, if any, is straight down.

    I'm having trouble telling the age of the dungeon. The broken pillar on the left makes it look relatively old, but everything else such as the chain, floor, walls, make it look like a newly built dungeon.

    I'd also suggest posting up more images from different angles and areas. Keep up the good work!
  • Benvox2
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    Benvox2 polycounter lvl 10
    Pretty cool! I think the ground is too flat for a dungeon. I would add a bit of noise to the geo so it is slightly uneven. Then I would place slightly raised geo bricks like you have done with the walls.
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