Secret Romance
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Hi folks,
this is my first entry here so bare with me.
I'm already pretty far with this project and I wanted to ask you guys for some critique.
I wanted to create an interior rendering cause it was completely missing from my portfolio.
The main idea is that there are two people in a secret relationship and they are only able to see each other at nighttime.
I don't want to make it to obvious so i try to stray some breadcrumbs, like the 2 slightly open doors, her shoes and the painting on the wall.
The fog is still a bit noisy but as a seperate render element it will be easy to smooth it a tiny bit.
All the textures are made with substance designer and it's rendered with redshift which is an incredible engine.
To me it fells like something is missing in the foreground or the camera position is not optimal for my idea?!
hope you can help
see ya guys.
this is my first entry here so bare with me.
I'm already pretty far with this project and I wanted to ask you guys for some critique.
I wanted to create an interior rendering cause it was completely missing from my portfolio.
The main idea is that there are two people in a secret relationship and they are only able to see each other at nighttime.
I don't want to make it to obvious so i try to stray some breadcrumbs, like the 2 slightly open doors, her shoes and the painting on the wall.
The fog is still a bit noisy but as a seperate render element it will be easy to smooth it a tiny bit.
All the textures are made with substance designer and it's rendered with redshift which is an incredible engine.
To me it fells like something is missing in the foreground or the camera position is not optimal for my idea?!
hope you can help
see ya guys.