I have a feeling at this point it's gonna be about costume critique than the sculpt itself. It's looking good. I suspect most of this is gonna be the texturing effort.
its hard to give any decent crits on the patterns with the 2d window being so overlaid, but from a glance I can see that you are getting some very unusual creases around the groin and armpit area. the groin and butt need more of a J shaped cut in order to sit properly, and your arm holes are descending to a V shape rather than a U which makes the tight bunching creases at the armpit which look odd. Without seeing your ref I cant really comment on the upper sleeves, but they feel "off" I cant put my finger on why.
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hope that helps