Hitman suitcase + Beretta.45

Dragonar

Hi everyone !
I just finished a new piece for my portfolio and I would like to share with you and get your advices.

It's a "hitman suitcase" with a "Beretta.45" , I put some " " because it's not from the game "Hitman" and it's not exactly  a Beretta.45 it's more I took the insipiration of this gun.

I'm pretty happy about the final result of the gun and the suitcase. The only things I'm not super fan is the mini scene I created. I don't like the table and the composition, maybe I'm gonna delete it. but if you have any idea to improve it or change don't hesitate to tell me !

Enjoy !



Another version of the suitcase


And the scene that I don't really like

Another version

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Dragonar

@TeriyakiStyle: Thanks for your advice dude ! I agree with you , I put some love on the gun and the suitcase but not really on the table and the folder ( I did it in 10min) and I think we can feel that. The things is at the beginning my first idea was to create only the gun and then when I saw the gun I thought about the suitcase and then the scene with the table. But the idea of the passport and money is really nice ! I think I'm gonna rework the scene on that direction.

Dragonar

Hi polycounters !

Here an update of my scene , I'm more happy about this scene composition ! I hesitate to add the gun out of the suitcase and maybe on the middle of the scene....I don't know...

So I'm looking for advice  don't hesitate to tell me what do you think !

enjoy