Combo Attack Animation

antonny08

Hi i'm beginner animator.
So your critics very well received.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A3F6FzaOcaw

AnthonyAnimation

Hey there antonny! Looks like you have a nice start. I would recommend uploading to synchsketch and pulling the camera in a bit, that way we can more easily give a critique.

antonny08

AnthonyAnimation said:

Hey there antonny! Looks like you have a nice start. I would recommend uploading to synchsketch and pulling the camera in a bit, that way we can more easily give a critique.

Hello, this is the link, I made a small change

So, how was your opinion?

Thank you very much in advance

Https://syncsketch.com/sketch/149016#177209

_adamturnbull

Hey man, good stuff! I left some notes on syncsketch. I think its mainly your posing and the final spin attack that needs work. Make sure the arcs on the sword flow in a curve and his posing matches what he is currently doing (using compression and stretching to show quick changes in velocity.. etc)

AnthonyAnimation

Hey @antonny08, I finally got around to leaving some comments as well. You have a good base and you're on the right track once you hit the notes.