Animation Demoreel Feedback

rahil1312

Hello fellow Artists,

I have recently finsihed my Animation Demoreel. Would love to get feedback/critiques from you guys. 



Thanks.

AnthonyAnimation

Some pretty cool stuff! If you're looking for feedback on specific shots I would recommend uploading it to syncsketch. Overall you have some fun pieces, but it's quite long. Around 40 seconds total is good. It forces you to include your strongest pieces. It's harder to keep someone's attention for over a minute. I think you can cut out your dream sequence, or at least make it more focused. It's a cool story, but it's mostly the same type of action over a few shots.

The guy with the sword is interesting, the timing can be much punchier and the reactions tightened up.

BradleyMAdams

I think the quad views of 4 different animations is a bad idea, its hard to see them individually and could indicate that you want to try and hide it or make it hard for the viewer to see. I can see why you did it since they fall under a same category.

I agree with @AnthonyAnimation in regards to his comments.