Geekson's Hard Surface practice thread

Geekson

Hey guys! I'm starting this thread to improve the quality of my work, with the hope of getting some criticisms and advice 
Here is the model of Death Hurler - rocket launcher from Exteel. I made a test bake to test my low poly, and it seems to be fine. Though, despite high resolution (4k) of texture, texel density is relatively small (look at these screws!). I'm gonna add a lot of printed text later, so it's kinda vital for me.
Also I'm worried a bit about optimization - in the area of barrel for example.
So i'll be glad to hear any critique

Geekson

Little update:

Geekson

Another update, and now I can consider it complete  




https://www.artstation.com/artwork/BQWBk

CrazyMoon

Hey cool hard surface man! If I could give a little feedback it'd be some of the edges being too sharp. If you get some stronger bevels on there it will catch the light a lot better and look a little more interesting. Really dig the labels and details near the handle and main body  

Geekson

CrazyMoon said:

Hey cool hard surface man! If I could give a little feedback it'd be some of the edges being too sharp. If you get some stronger bevels on there it will catch the light a lot better and look a little more interesting. Really dig the labels and details near the handle and main body  

Thanks, CrazyMoon!  Did you mean edges on the red part?

Meanwhile, I finished high poly for FN SCAR H. It's partly based on tutorial by 3Dnice, very good one, I learned some cool tips from this

Now i'm gonna model silencer and forehand grip, maybe laser and holo sight. 
Any tips for making glass material for holosight? 
http://www.eotechinc.com/holographic-weapon-sights/model-552