Hey Polycount, I'm starting a Harvest Moon inspired side project which focuses on wizards and magical towns. I'll mainly be working on environments and props at the moment, and hope to add characters and creatures eventually. Also, my bf is currently modeling the Charm Shop, his topic can be found here. Concepts will be posted in this topic, and all feedback is definitely appreciated!
I agree with everyone here, you've got some lovely work
Only suggestions I'd make are perhaps some variance in line weight as they all seem pretty similar right now, there's no 'focus; to draw my eye,
And the colours feel like they're quite far from their local value, instead taking on quite a lot of the hue of the light. (Unless this is a stylistic choice?)
@tchuk Thank you! I agree the lines could definitely have some more line weight variation haha. I'll try focusing on that with the drawing I'm working on. For the small WIP environments, the colors are more influenced by the light at the moment but I would be willing to try variations where they are more true to their local colors!
@Elithenia Thank you! I'm a huge fan of those games too haha. Have you ever played Rune Factory?? @ziikutv Sure! I'd be happy to see a model of any of the props.
I finished the interior layout! Near the end I tried to focus on line weight a little bit more to help the spaces feel more individual. After this I will be making some smaller sketches for the project, hopefully getting a sense for how this area feels c:
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thats all I have to say, dont really have anything to critique. especially love those two last pages.
Only suggestions I'd make are perhaps some variance in line weight as they all seem pretty similar right now, there's no 'focus; to draw my eye,
And the colours feel like they're quite far from their local value, instead taking on quite a lot of the hue of the light. (Unless this is a stylistic choice?)
Otherwise I really like them!
@ziikutv Sure! I'd be happy to see a model of any of the props.