Guts-Berserk

KingKellogg · Mar 2017

Been working a lot, so I started this recently. Taking a while, and figured I'd share for some critique.

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stororokw · Mar 2017

Hi Kelloggs. Just a few couple things that you might agree/disagree with:

He is like 190-200cm tall and right now he is looking a little too average in proportions to be have that heroic look.
He is currently too thin and the body is rather curvy which makes him look too feminine.
The thigh gap is huge, again feminine.
Arms are too short/skinny, push the proportions in either direction.
Clothing is looking thin and lacks impact. For example the belts and plates need to be more readable/chunky to really sell the design.

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JunkieKong · Mar 2017

Beef him up! Guts is meant to be ripped

KingKellogg · Mar 2017

Did armor texture- ( was supposed to post last night... And Buffed him up ( did a bit last night)! Will post it after some more muscle is added! Will fix armor proportions too! Thanks a lot guys!

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KingKellogg · Apr 2017

Ok, update, made him thicker

Guts-Berserk

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