[WIP] Looking for critique on this Ski Lodge Environment

Stewart774

This is only my second full Environment as a 3D artist so i'm still learning a lot of things, so I'm looking what to change and what to add to the scene etc? 

Thanks Guys

Stewart774

bump

RustySpannerz

Haha, don't bump, just give us an update  

It's actually a really good start, your understanding of space is good, and your materials look nice. I would take a look at similar pictures and see what yours is missing by comparison. I think this guy has a really good example of a lodge. 
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/ykRJx

You've just got to think about how you get your piece to that same level. 

Gilgamesh

Looks a good start, I think the floor texture is a bit off for some reason, maybe a little too larger a grain.  Rusty posted a good example of a texture with a nice bit of variation but it's also covered to give the floor a bit of interest.  Add some details like some items on the fireplace shelf.

Stewart774

RustySpannerz said:

Haha, don't bump, just give us an update  

It's actually a really good start, your understanding of space is good, and your materials look nice. I would take a look at similar pictures and see what yours is missing by comparison. I think this guy has a really good example of a lodge. 
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/ykRJx

You've just got to think about how you get your piece to that same level. 

Thanks very much, I have just over a month to complete it (student project) Thanks so much for linking that environment, its CRAZY good. I wish I could make stuff that good but not even sure how.

Stewart774

Gilgamesh said:

Looks a good start, I think the floor texture is a bit off for some reason, maybe a little too larger a grain.  Rusty posted a good example of a texture with a nice bit of variation but it's also covered to give the floor a bit of interest.  Add some details like some items on the fireplace shelf.

Thank you, i'll work on smaller items to add.

Stewart774

Hi guys here is a small update, what do you think? any other critique I can work on? Thanks!