WIP Limbo, Uni Project

Neobanana

Hey Everybody, I am just working on a project for uni and my friend recommended this site to gain some feedback and critique. Any feedback on the animation, lighting, shots and the environment are greatly appreciated. If you have any question feel free to ask, I will reply as soon as I can unless I am sleeping under my desk.

Cheers, Tom
https://youtu.be/B7nEZkKIxrk

Arturow

Hello Neobanana,

It's almost entire camera work and looks nice but the parts where the run cycle appears it looks that it has pops especially around 1:00, that could be fixed just going to your graph editor and see where are those messy curves

AnthonyAnimation

I'll second what Arturow said. I understand that you want to get the character across the screen within the camera pan, but be sure to pay attention to weight and arc. If you upload some of your animation to Syncsketch I would gladly dive a bit further into critique!