Final Pose Armor Girl!

Nikolas3D

Hi Guys , this is the render from Marmoset with the final pose!
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Ne8md
The concept is from ji yeun KIm , https://www.artstation.com/artwork/YJr6b

Svyat

Looks cool, how long did it take?

Nikolas3D

Thanks,Like a 6 weeks, but the rigging take a long time, a friend help me with that!

RocketBryan

Neat character, mate! Your work on replicating the concept is pretty spot-on.

I'm unsure of how close to finished you want to call this, but I would say you're perhaps not quite there yet with your materials. Although obviously if she's still a work in progress than you can disregard this.

The concept itself begs to be a handpainted model, but it seems like you're heading towards more of a contemporary standard material setup. You're absolutely free try something different, just make sure you're heading confidently in one direction. If it's hand-painted, then ensure you add some quality painting time into your remaining pipeline. If you choose a typical PBR type setup, then make sure you're getting good definition on your materials and replicating the look/feel of the metals, leathers, skin, etc., even if it's slightly stylized. At the moment, she's landing somewhere in between and it's looking a little mushy - almost like you're simply applying the normals and then color filling on top.

Nikolas3D

Hi!
Thanks for the advice, as for the textures i wanted to leave it as clean as possible, not add much noise, but you are right
I need to improve the definition of materials! Thanks 

Jakub

She looks really gorgeous Nikolas Well done!

I'd work on materials like @RocketBrian mentioned.

Nikolas3D

Thanks man!

theStoff

Look really Nice. Th model is solid and I like the color scheme. What bothers me though is material identification. Everything has a similar level of shine. The metals are pretty mat and the skin could use more sub-surface. Even for stylized stuff metals would have more highlights painted in and skin would have more reds in the texture. I also feel the chest is a bit awkwardly wide but it's a bit late to change that and isn't too big of a deal. Hope that helps

Nikolas3D

Thanks!, yeah materials, I need to make them better!

Nikolas3D

Hi guys, some changes in the metal parts, some information in the cloth, and make the skin shader in marmoset!
Hope you can give me some tips in my other post ( bloodborn fan art)
http://polycount.com/discussion/182692/bloodborne-fan-art-wip#latest