Here what I got so far theres quite a few things that needs changes here and there but ye its something lul. Also I changed the hands design a bit since it so rough in the concept and what was in the concept didnt work very well.
mike's concepts are so damn cool, good choice! the shoulders are looking pretty slender, maybe push them out wider? the arms are also looking a bit too long.
Man I love your metal and the corroded details. Looks super solid! I feel like the head is just a tad too small, but I agree with the arm length in the concept. Maybe add some width to the upper part of the torso? his sides look very straight. Keeping my eye on this for sure!
Oooh :O Really cool! Hmm my two cents would be to watch for the shape of the rib cage, on your model the torso armor is a bit too cylindrical while on Mike's concept the shape is more dynamic, closer to the classic superhero silhouette.
Are you planning on texturing? That'd be really badass! XD
Tectonic Thanks for the crit I think the arms is pretty long in the concept but I may end up shorten them maybe a bit. Zolizzo Thanks dude yeah I agree the uppertorso was just to slender so I gave it more of a width now tho I may end up pushing it even more. I enlarged the size a bit on the head tho I kinda like it where it is now Alebrijes Thanks man! yeah ribcage was a fail on the first update I kinda fixed it now, tho I may need to fix a bit more on it And yepp I will be making a lowpoly + textures and render da dude in Toolbag 3
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I feel like the head is just a tad too small, but I agree with the arm length in the concept.
Maybe add some width to the upper part of the torso? his sides look very straight.
Keeping my eye on this for sure!
Are you planning on texturing? That'd be really badass! XD
Zolizzo Thanks dude yeah I agree the uppertorso was just to slender so I gave it more of a width now tho I may end up pushing it even more. I enlarged the size a bit on the head tho I kinda like it where it is now
Alebrijes Thanks man! yeah ribcage was a fail on the first update I kinda fixed it now, tho I may need to fix a bit more on it And yepp I will be making a lowpoly + textures and render da dude in Toolbag 3
Minor update here
And Boom its done lol
I hope ya like it
More pics here:
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/rKwE2