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BradleyMAdams polycounter lvl 3
Hi, I've got a new showreel

any feedback?




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  • isosmrt
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    isosmrt triangle
    Hey man! some cool stuff in there.
    Some things I look for when I'm checking out animation reels is a convincing and realistic sense of weight. The raptor didn't quite feel like he had the weight a creature that size would have. I would at large birds like an ostrich or something for some reference, it would be a huge help.

    Theres some nice poses and behavior in here, I just think reference will be your best friend if you want to get to the next level!
    Cheers!
  • KielFiggins
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    KielFiggins polycounter lvl 8
    Fun stuff, watch out for making your toes too floppy.  Rarely do toes curl upwards, instead focus more on tucking them inward on the lift to create a shape like,  lll  ,then on the plant, splay them out to create a shape like,  / l \   .   This shows contrasting shapes, but conveys the weight being distributed down the limb.

  • Karimelhann
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    Very cool Stuff i liked it  :smiley:
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