Anatomy Studies for portfolio

Anomaly

Hey Polycount,

Been working on updating my portfolio would love to get some feedback on what you guys think about it. Let me know what you guys like or dislike it would help so much,

Thank you.

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/WgyXE

Eric Chadwick

Good idea to study anatomy!

Please don't use PNGs for sharing screenshots on the web. Your image is almost 9mb.
http://polycount.com/discussion/63361/information-about-polycount-new-member-introductions/p1#make

Anomaly

Ah I'm sorry, deleted for now I will reupload when I have access to make it smaller

Anomaly

Updated

Eric Chadwick

Thanks.

I think this is a solid start.

The muscles look a bit blobby and unrefined, as do some of the bones. It would help to have some sharper & finer treatment.

The eyeball on the left seems out of place. It's all skeletal on the left, but you seem to be presenting the eye as a bone? 

Presentation is too low-key in my opinion. Gray material with gray frontal lighting, the image gamut is all very low (no brights), the camera is frontal and cuts off the rest of the model. 

I'd suggest looking up ecorche and see how people present their models.

Again great start, and a great way to study the forms. Keep it up!