This is a impressive work for someone who is starting out. A couple nosey and imperative critiques I can give you: Your bot is heavily textured, I'm not sure what is the focal point in it, everything is equally sharp. Your sand snake has a bit of a confusing story, could use a different angle, maybe a shot from worm's eye to make it really powerful, but I'm not sure why the knight is standing still.
Keep it up, I'm sure you'll figure a lot of these out
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Post new work daily, or as often as you can. People are more likely to provide feedback, the more often the thread is updated.
Also you get the benefit of practice-makes-perfect, critique or not.
A couple nosey and imperative critiques I can give you:
Your bot is heavily textured, I'm not sure what is the focal point in it, everything is equally sharp.
Your sand snake has a bit of a confusing story, could use a different angle, maybe a shot from worm's eye to make it really powerful, but I'm not sure why the knight is standing still.
Keep it up, I'm sure you'll figure a lot of these out