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Middnight
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Middnight polycounter lvl 5
Hey guys,

wanted to get a bit more involved into the community and figured the best way was to show what i'm working on and keep it updated.

background; this is a character i've been working on and off for about 2 years now, supposedly one day he's gonna be the main character of my game, but above all he's my anatomy learning character. I always worked on him with his arms down, but yesterday i decided to to continue on him with a t-pose, so i get to learn that. this is what i got so far





close up head



quick note; - fucked up his hands with posing them and resizing, they are probably the worst part of the sculpt atm.
                  - split between legs is no problem since hes gonna be dressed anyway.
                  - I would love some feedback on the shoulders
            
Thanks for your time, goodluck with all your project

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  • Greenfudge
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    Greenfudge polycounter lvl 8
    Hey dude, looking great so far. Here's just a few things that I can see that stand out to me. The triceps lookin a bit flat compared to the rest of the arm so I'd define there shape a bring them out more (pump them up a bit :p )
    Also upper part of his external obliques and serratus anterior could do with similar treatment.
    All in all I'd recommend looking at the origin and insertion of muscles and the kind of shapes they make when they've been built up, tensed, and relaxed.

    Hope that helps :)
  • Middnight
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    Middnight polycounter lvl 5
    hey, thanks for the input. 

    worked on it for a few more days but kept feeling like i'm stuck on anatomy ( just constantly moving things around hoping it looks beter) so I decided to follow ryan kingslien's tutorial on anatomy and build a character from skeleton up.

    however, felt a bit inspired and decided to just trow cloth on him and see where it goes. 



    right now it looks all clean but i'm going to make him really dirty and tattered, add some more armor and maybe some more fur.
    Trying to make a character that looks like he used to be a holy, dignified man who lost faith and now fights in the shadow against the ever looming darkness

    will see where it goes and keep posting here

    any input much appreciated, thanks

  • Middnight
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    Middnight polycounter lvl 5
     

    some updates, gonna clean up/ add final details now
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