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World's smallest ring pistol.

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Rahul garg(Doyen) polycounter lvl 3
I am sharing one of my work -World's smallest ring pistol. I like to hear you valuable C&C.
Hope you guys Like it.

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  • Daf57
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    Daf57 greentooth
    Looks good -  nice work!
  • FullSynch
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    FullSynch polycounter lvl 12
    Looks good, I like the material. I actually did one of these myself (portfolio in signature).

    There's a couple issues with your model:
    - The hammer wouldn't be able to cock back over that sharp corner it connects to. 
    - No bullet pins, this ring uses special bullets with firing pins sticking out the side. 
    - The hammer doesn't make contact with where the bullet pins would be. 
    - The piece with (055) on it should form a wall around the base of the cylinder, protecting the pins from contact, exposing them only to the hammer. 
    - The trigger has no room to move.
    - The 'latch' on the side of the ring works by locking into the little pits on the cylinder, so it needs to make contact with the cylinder.
    - It also scrapes along the side when you rotate the cylinder, so show some damage there. 
    - The engravings are all one height value, should be deeper in the center of the lines. 

    I think with these changes and your stellar material work, you'll have an awesome piece on your hands. Keep at it! 
  • Rahul garg(Doyen)
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    Rahul garg(Doyen) polycounter lvl 3
    Thanks for your valuable feedback FullSynch & will work on it in free time.
  • Rahul garg(Doyen)
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    Rahul garg(Doyen) polycounter lvl 3
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