My current demo reel. Critique pwetty pwease? :3

The0ptimus64

Hey all,

Here's my current demo reel:





I graduated from college earlier this year. Obviously it's still an amateur reel, but hey, it's a work in progress. Any advice, thoughts, etc?


Thank you for your time, I really appreciate it.

tholmes3d

Small thing, but I would shrink the text and place it a little further in the corner. I think it's getting in the way of your shots (the kids rolling on the ground). Since it is pretty much the same from shot to shot I don't think you need to worry about the audience not knowing what you did. It's good to be clear about that, and show off everything you did, but I would say not at the expense of your shot. 

The0ptimus64

tholmes3d said:

Small thing, but I would shrink the text and place it a little further in the corner. I think it's getting in the way of your shots (the kids rolling on the ground). Since it is pretty much the same from shot to shot I don't think you need to worry about the audience not knowing what you did. It's good to be clear about that, and show off everything you did, but I would say not at the expense of your shot. 

Hm...okay thanks, I'll consider doing that, that's a good idea. What about the content itself?