Critiques for this painting?

MiragentGames

Painted this late last night. Looking for some critiques on it.

lotet

Looking good, this is a solid foundation for sure!
some stuff to consider though:

- get some neck reference, there is a lot of subtle detail missing in the throat area. Here and Here are two examples of what I mean.

- the same goes for the ear, its looking like you had a solid start, but then kinda said "fuck it" and winged it half way through =P

- dont shade with gray/black, especially not for skin. look up SSS skin shaders for good reference. example

- the two pixies would cast light onto the body, atleast on the neck and hair, kinda like this.

- personal opinion, but the flying torso is really weird, either fade it out into the background or extend/crop the image so its not visible.

Good luck!