Space Ship Grasshoper Explorer-Need Critiques(Wip)

Ibrahim Aysan

This is a model i've done for my sc
This is a model i've done for my school project and i need technical and artistic critiques please.

PyrZern

I can't tell where the cockpit/bridge is. Or where is the door/airlock. Some sense of scale would be nice too. Can't tell how big it is. Nor its purpose.

Ibrahim Aysan

PyrZern said:

I can't tell where the cockpit/bridge is. Or where is the door/airlock. Some sense of scale would be nice too. Can't tell how big it is. Nor its purpose.

The thing is i forgot to say its wip it has a elevator down below.I haven't finished it yet.Cockpit is the sphere in front i am working on that too.About purpose i guess you are right.Need to add some features for that.And thanks for the critiques.

Joopson

Based on modeled details (the metal pieces, and lights especially), this is the scale I "feel" from it. I assume that's not the size you're going for, since you mention an elevator.

Ibrahim Aysan

Joopson said:

Based on modeled details (the metal pieces, and lights especially), this is the scale I "feel" from it. I assume that's not the size you're going for, since you mention an elevator.

So what you are saying is simply shrink that metal pieces.And instead of using 4 big lights i guess i should add more but smaller lights.Maybe shrink landing gears too but not sure about engine though.And by the way this is the scale i want to go for.Thanks a lot for advices.