[UE4] Theatre Basement

conradfay · Nov 2016

Hi Polycount! This is my first project post, and I was hoping to get some feedback and critiques. This is a portfolio piece based on concept art for The Illusionist, found here (image 145). Please critique anything, though the things I'm less confident on are composition and lighting.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/a7/5az1ja5eai7c.png

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/ez/dzdq9o903gvi.png

FreneticPonies · Nov 2016

Very nice!

macoll · Nov 2016

Very good 3D and lighting !
The problem is the point of view you choose for your first image, there is not any 'hot points' to watch (i mean with the rule of thirds). The coat hanger ruins the image imo...i will put it in the shadows on the right... In the ref image (image 147), clearly the door and the girl are the 2 hot points...hope i am clear

A small link --> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rule_of_thirds

conradfay · Nov 2016

That makes perfect sense! Here are some updated shots with that in mind.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/sf/7ekxm0vg20sc.png

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/bt/u0t05imsolfb.png

macoll · Nov 2016

Hey!
The 1 is my fav, the second picture is great too but i would have put the poster just in front of the paint bucket (matter of taste here i guess

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Really cool art

[UE4] Theatre Basement

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